Thursday, May 26, 2011

2MORROW

I AM SO EXCITED 4 2MORROW! IM GONNA WEAR SOMETHING SO CUTE.THEN IM GONNA TAKE 4TH GRADERS AROUND MY SCHOOL.IM GONNA LEAVE SKOOL AT 1 AND GONNA BE WAITING IMPAITENTLY 4 SATURDAY 2 COME .GUESS WHERE IM GOING 2 GO?QUEENS,NEW YORK!IM SINGING AT A METS GAME!GONNA BE SINGING STAND UP AMERICA!THIS BLOG BY JAMILAH SHAKUR
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  1. elm city bloggersMay 31, 2011 at 12:49 PM

    Jamilah, I love your enthusiasm and I enjoy reading about your trips, adventures, and accomplishments.

    You have really captured the essence of blogging. You try to bring excitement to your blogs and you really want people to read your blogs.

    However, I must say here and now that if you really want to be taken seriously as a blogger and as a writer, you must improve your spelling and use of punctuation.

    I know I gave you permission to write your blogs in your own way, using special spelling codes (2 instead of to, etc.), using all caps and other tricks, BUT, now is the time to start practicing your real writing skills...

    You could be a great writer someday, but it's going to take a lot of work and a lot of practice. Are you up to it?

    Mr. C

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